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Laura Fedeliai like the way you establish Kathkins arppox age early on and how she is initialily confused by the voice, the gradual aceptance that there is something otherowordly going on is very believable. You are growing so much as a writer. I hope you are enjoying the journey. I already felt I could get to know Kathlin and her mom now I feel like I've been to their house for diner. Thanks for all your hard work, please dont stop.
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(VISITOR) AUTHOR'S NAME Nami
MESSAGE TIMESTAMP 19 december 2014, 10:47:48
AUTHOR'S IP LOGGED 107.191.96.123
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