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Hello Pinne,Take a look at the correction below,I just hepeld you to correct the grammar mistakes, but the ideas, and other matter I didn't change.Now, I live in HCMC, but I was born in Long Xuyen city, located in the center of An Giang province. It's a beutiful place. If you walking walk or ride a bike around the city, it’s very night nice.There are a lot of bookstores, the city is full of monuments, parks, and fountains. I am pround of my hometown, there has are a lot of beautiful views, you can go shopping. Everyone often works group in a coffee shop.the weather here is ideal. There are only 2 reasons, rainy reason, and dry reason. In dry reason, you can play many activities like as going fishing with family fishing on the river, . . But, the rain reason, you just stay at home and to see the rainbow after the rain.Everyday you don’t hear the sound noise like HCMC, It’s quiet, neighborhood are friendly, helpful.If you come to my hometown, I think you will like it.
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(VISITOR) AUTHOR'S NAME
Jihan
MESSAGE TIMESTAMP
19 december 2014, 03:23:01
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