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You need to include in your wrtiing:SimilesMetaphorsAmazing adjectives (eg: impenetrable, glorious etc)Lots of descriptionMoodAtmosphereVariety of sentence openersVariety of connectivesRange of sentences (simple, compound and complex)Punctuation (ellipses, semi-colon)(Don't forget the simple stuff as well!)
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(VISITOR) AUTHOR'S NAME
Carol
MESSAGE TIMESTAMP
18 december 2014, 04:13:55
AUTHOR'S IP LOGGED
62.210.78.179
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