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The crux of your writing whslit appearing agreeable initially, did not settle very well with me personally after some time. Somewhere throughout the paragraphs you actually managed to make me a believer but just for a while. I however have a problem with your jumps in assumptions and one might do well to fill in all those breaks. When you actually can accomplish that, I could certainly be impressed.
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(VISITOR) AUTHOR'S NAME
Omar
MESSAGE TIMESTAMP
17 december 2014, 02:49:25
AUTHOR'S IP LOGGED
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