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I like the passage in Corey's hatiwrindng because it's a dream sequence, you can definitely get away with it. Realistically, I can't see any internet-addicted teen writing like that though without including a few smileys and the words omg and lol at least once
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(VISITOR) AUTHOR'S NAME Frank
MESSAGE TIMESTAMP 16 december 2014, 17:21:03
AUTHOR'S IP LOGGED 190.77.118.131
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