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Great writing! I can't wait until the part where The Twister comes. I can see where the plot setup for that will be very extiicng and action-packed.'And I was going to say the same thing with the quotation marks. I know sometimes we make silly mistakes. I always remember to proofread my writing. Even when we think there are no errors there usually are. But, great job!
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(VISITOR) AUTHOR'S NAME Elena
MESSAGE TIMESTAMP 16 december 2014, 13:02:54
AUTHOR'S IP LOGGED 186.91.109.188
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