Utah. This process of FourthFiction is quite cmlpoex and I think it is because there exist relationships for the reader that not only relate to the characters and scenarios of the stories but also, and more strongly than normal when reading, to the author. The result is that I find that I have an unjustifiable tendency to relate content to the character of the author more than might be the case under normal reading conditions. Originally, I thought that you were male and I had a sense of unease about where you were coming from but this contribution has done much to change that, I'm glad. The contribution is very good and creates a whole range of feelings as it is being read. There are some interesting insights and and the scene of disappearance into the corn field is an excellent representation of the dream state. Your implementation of the challenges is also very good. It certainly justifies further input.